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Year 11 - English

Writing concise and developed comparisons of non-fiction texts

Non-fiction: explorers

Unit Summary

In this unit, pupils develop their non-fiction reading and writing skills by looking at non-fiction texts about explorers. They first conceptualise travel writing, before building towards making concise and developed comparisons between texts. They finally create a compelling account about a place.

Lesson Summary

You will learn to write concise and developed comparisons of writers' attitudes.

Key Notes

  • A key characteristic of concise writing is specific and precise word choices.
  • Adjectives can be used to add detail to your writing.
  • Repetition should be avoided unless it is intentional and for a deliberate effect.
  • Developed writing tracks the movement and change of ideas and feelings.
  • A useful way to think of developing an answer is in terms of establish, build and end.

Vocabulary To Learn

  • concise: giving information in a brief but comprehensive way
  • precise: sharply defined or stated
  • to establish: to set up on a firm basis or foundation
  • insightful: showing an accurate and deep understanding

Common Mistakes To Avoid

  • Students sometimes think they need to include as much as possible in their argument and support their ideas with overly long quotations.

3 Quick Questions (With Answers)

1. Explain this English learning goal in two key points.

A key characteristic of concise writing is specific and precise word choices. Adjectives can be used to add detail to your writing.

2. Define this language term and use it in a sentence. 'concise'

giving information in a brief but comprehensive way.

3. Correct this common English misunderstanding.

Mistake: Students sometimes think they need to include as much as possible in their argument and support their ideas with overly long quotations. Correction: Encourage students to select short and precise quotations to keep their writing concise.

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