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Year 3 - English

Writing the opening of 'The BFG' (part two)

'The BFG': reading and narrative writing

Unit Summary

In this unit, pupils write their own version of two sections of narrative based on 'The BFG', using their exploration of the original text by Roald Dahl in the accompanying reading unit. Pupils write a narrative opening and build-up, using literary devices to meet specific purposes.

Lesson Summary

You will learn to write the second part of a narrative opening based on 'The BFG'.

Key Notes

  • The purpose of a narrative opening is to introduce the characters and to describe the setting to the reader.
  • Saying sentences aloud before they are written helps to check for sense.
  • Using the full range of sentence types (simple, compound and complex) improves text flow for the reader.
  • Fronted adverbials of time, place and manner add extra detail to the main clause.
  • 'Show-not-tell' language shows a character's feelings by describing their actions, body language and facial expressions.

Vocabulary To Learn

  • text flow: how a text is written to keep the reader engaged
  • fronted adverbial: a sentence starter followed by a comma
  • past tense: shows that the action happened before now
  • complex sentence: a sentence formed of at least one main clause and a subordinate clause

Common Mistakes To Avoid

  • Pupils might find it challenging when writing in the irregular past tense.

3 Quick Questions (With Answers)

1. Explain this English learning goal in two key points.

The purpose of a narrative opening is to introduce the characters and to describe the setting to the reader. Saying sentences aloud before they are written helps to check for sense.

2. Define this language term and use it in a sentence. 'text flow'

how a text is written to keep the reader engaged.

3. Correct this common English misunderstanding.

Mistake: Pupils might find it challenging when writing in the irregular past tense. Correction: Refer to the Year 3 unit 'Tense forms: simple, progressive and perfect' for opportunities for further discrete grammar teaching around tense.

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