Year 4 - English
Writing the opening of 'A Christmas Carol'
'A Christmas Carol': narrative writing and reading
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Unit Summary
In this unit, pupils explore A Christmas Carol, learning about its context and developing comprehension through targeted questions. They analyse characterisation, themes, and the story's ending. Pupils then plan and write a setting description, along with the opening, build-up and climax.
Lesson Summary
You will learn to write a narrative opening based on 'A Christmas Carol'.
Key Notes
- The introduction of Scrooge's character greatly contrasts the general Christmas atmosphere in the opening.
- Precise vocabulary, including 'show and tell' and direct speech, conveys a character's traits and feelings.
- Using a range of simple, compound and complex sentences supports text flow.
- A relative complex sentence uses a relative pronoun (who or which) to provide greater detail about a noun.
- Inverted commas are used to demarcate speech and a piece of punctuation separates speech from the reporting clause.
Vocabulary To Learn
- contrast: the comparison of two or more elements that are strikingly different
- 'show and tell': a writing technique for showing a character's feelings with description of their actions and expressions
- direct speech: the term used for a character speaking out loud in a text
- text flow: how a text is written to keep the reader engaged
- relative complex sentence: a sentence formed of a main clause and a relative subordinate clause
Common Mistakes To Avoid
- Children may assume that any mention of character speech is direct speech, because that has been the focus in the lesson.
3 Quick Questions (With Answers)
1. Explain this English learning goal in two key points.
The introduction of Scrooge's character greatly contrasts the general Christmas atmosphere in the opening. Precise vocabulary, including 'show and tell' and direct speech, conveys a character's traits and feelings.
2. Define this language term and use it in a sentence. 'contrast'
the comparison of two or more elements that are strikingly different.
3. Correct this common English misunderstanding.
Mistake: Children may assume that any mention of character speech is direct speech, because that has been the focus in the lesson. Correction: Model how speech can still be indirectly reported within the opening alongside direct speech. E.g. 'Scrooge muttered insults at all those he passed.'.
More Lessons In This Unit
- Analysing the ending of 'A Christmas Carol' Study Guide
- Developing comprehension of 'A Christmas Carol' Study Guide
- Editing the build-up of 'A Christmas Carol' Study Guide
- Exploring and engaging with themes in 'A Christmas Carol' Study Guide
- Exploring characterisation in 'A Christmas Carol' Study Guide
- Learning about the context of 'A Christmas Carol' Study Guide
- Planning a setting description based on 'A Christmas Carol' Study Guide
- Planning the build up of 'A Christmas Carol' Study Guide
- Planning the climax of a 'A Christmas Carol' Study Guide
- Planning the opening of 'A Christmas Carol' Study Guide
- Writing a setting description based on 'A Christmas Carol' Study Guide
- Writing paragraph one of the build up of 'A Christmas Carol' Study Guide
- Writing paragraph two of the build up of 'A Christmas Carol' Study Guide
- Writing the climax of 'A Christmas Carol' Study Guide
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