Year 4 - English
Planning a desert island scene
Weather: descriptive writing
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Year 4 - English
Weather: descriptive writing
In this unit, pupils practise discrete narrative writing skills, basing their writing around typical stormy or desert island weather. Pupils practise using figurative language appropriately and with increasing sophistication; they also finish the unit by illustrating their descriptive scene writing.
You will learn to plan a descriptive scene about a hot desert island.
Precise and ambitious vocabulary related to the five senses should be included in the plan. Linguistic devices such as figurative language (similes and personification) should be included in the plan.
a framework that writers create before they write a section or whole text.
Mistake: Planning needs to be detailed and plans should be written in full sentences. Correction: Planning should log precise and ambitious vocabulary, linguistic devices and be written in note-from.
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