Year 4 - English
Writing a desert island scene
Weather: descriptive writing
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Unit Summary
In this unit, pupils practise discrete narrative writing skills, basing their writing around typical stormy or desert island weather. Pupils practise using figurative language appropriately and with increasing sophistication; they also finish the unit by illustrating their descriptive scene writing.
Lesson Summary
You will learn to write a descriptive scene about a hot desert island.
Key Notes
- Sentences should be said aloud before writing to ensure they make sense and read back once written to check for errors.
- Ambitious vocabulary and figurative language create a vivid picture in the reader's mind.
- Writers choose varied fronted adverbials and different sentence types to ensure the text flows for the reader.
- Careful selection of nouns and pronouns ensures cohesion within sentences and across sections of a written piece.
- Past simple, progressive and perfect verb forms can be used to improve text cohesion.
Vocabulary To Learn
- zoom-in: a writing technique that involves starting description with a broad idea and gradually narrowing the focus to explore specific details
- text flow: how a text is written to keep the reader engaged
- fronted adverbial: a sentence starter followed by a comma
- past tense: shows that the action happened before now
Common Mistakes To Avoid
- Pupils copy notes directly from their plans without forming full sentences.
3 Quick Questions (With Answers)
1. Explain this English learning goal in two key points.
Sentences should be said aloud before writing to ensure they make sense and read back once written to check for errors. Ambitious vocabulary and figurative language create a vivid picture in the reader's mind.
2. Define this language term and use it in a sentence. 'zoom-in'
a writing technique that involves starting description with a broad idea and gradually narrowing the focus to explore specific details.
3. Correct this common English misunderstanding.
Mistake: Pupils copy notes directly from their plans without forming full sentences. Correction: Pupils should say the sentence aloud first, then write it out. Finally, pupils should check their writing for sense and punctuation.
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