Year 4 - English
Planning the opening of 'Whale Rider'
'Whale Rider': narrative writing
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Unit Summary
In this unit, pupils write a range of narrative outcomes based on the film 'Whale Rider'. They analyse sections of the film carefully, from which they write an opening, an emotive scene and a resolution. Pupils also practise using speech punctuation accurately in their narratives.
Lesson Summary
You will learn to plan precise and ambitious vocabulary for the opening of 'Whale Rider'.
Key Notes
- The purpose of the opening is to engage the reader and introduce the setting and characters.
- The opening of the story introduces Paikea and her grandfather and their family context.
- Precise adjectives, verbs and adverbs are used to create a vivid picture for the reader.
- Precise and ambitious vocabulary is logged on a plan for future use.
- Notes should not be written in full sentences and bullet points can be used to make notes clear.
Vocabulary To Learn
- plan: a framework that writers create before they write a section or whole text
- notes: written out of full sentences
- precise vocabulary: specific and accurate words to convey exact meanings and details in writing
Common Mistakes To Avoid
- Pupils may find it difficult to know what makes certain vocabulary ambitious.
3 Quick Questions (With Answers)
1. Explain this English learning goal in two key points.
The purpose of the opening is to engage the reader and introduce the setting and characters. The opening of the story introduces Paikea and her grandfather and their family context.
2. Define this language term and use it in a sentence. 'plan'
a framework that writers create before they write a section or whole text.
3. Correct this common English misunderstanding.
Mistake: Pupils may find it difficult to know what makes certain vocabulary ambitious. Correction: Teach pupils that there can be many options when selecting vocabulary and they need to carefully choose the most precise words for each part of their writing. This is best explained by what effect they want to create for the reader.
More Lessons In This Unit
- Editing paragraphs of a narrative in 'Whale Rider' Study Guide
- Exploring characters' perspectives Study Guide
- Learning about the context of 'Whale Rider' Study Guide
- Planning a narrative scene with direct speech in 'Whale Rider' Study Guide
- Planning an emotive narrative scene in 'Whale Rider' Study Guide
- Planning the resolution of 'Whale Rider' Study Guide
- Practising writing direct speech for 'Whale Rider' Study Guide
- Publishing and reading my 'Whale Rider' narrative aloud Study Guide
- Retelling the story of 'Whale Rider' Study Guide
- Writing a narrative scene with direct speech in 'Whale Rider' Study Guide
- Writing paragraph one of an emotive narrative scene in 'Whale Rider' Study Guide
- Writing paragraph two of an emotive narrative scene in 'Whale Rider' Study Guide
- Writing the opening of 'Whale Rider' Study Guide
- Writing the resolution of 'Whale Rider' Study Guide
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