Year 4 - English
Writing a narrative scene with direct speech in 'Whale Rider'
'Whale Rider': narrative writing
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Unit Summary
In this unit, pupils write a range of narrative outcomes based on the film 'Whale Rider'. They analyse sections of the film carefully, from which they write an opening, an emotive scene and a resolution. Pupils also practise using speech punctuation accurately in their narratives.
Lesson Summary
You will learn to write a narrative scene with direct speech in 'Whale Rider'.
Key Notes
- The purpose of direct speech in a narrative is to develop characters and advance the plot.
- Using a range of sentence types (simple, compound and complex) improves text flow.
- Fronted adverbials of time, place or manner add extra detail to a main clause.
- This narrative version of 'Whale Rider' is written in the past tense.
- Oral rehearsal before writing helps to structure grammatically correct sentences and check for sense.
Vocabulary To Learn
- direct speech: the term used for a character speaking out loud in a text
- fronted adverbial: a sentence starter followed by a comma
- 'show-not-tell': shows a character's feelings by describing their actions, body language and facial expressions
- ambitious vocabulary: high-level language in writing that meets the text purpose
Common Mistakes To Avoid
- Pupils may confuse speech punctuation rules when writing speech first and speech second in a narrative.
3 Quick Questions (With Answers)
1. Explain this English learning goal in two key points.
The purpose of direct speech in a narrative is to develop characters and advance the plot. Using a range of sentence types (simple, compound and complex) improves text flow.
2. Define this language term and use it in a sentence. 'direct speech'
the term used for a character speaking out loud in a text.
3. Correct this common English misunderstanding.
Mistake: Pupils may confuse speech punctuation rules when writing speech first and speech second in a narrative. Correction: At the end of speech first, a full stop must not be used. At the end of speech second, a full stop can be used.
More Lessons In This Unit
- Editing paragraphs of a narrative in 'Whale Rider' Study Guide
- Exploring characters' perspectives Study Guide
- Learning about the context of 'Whale Rider' Study Guide
- Planning a narrative scene with direct speech in 'Whale Rider' Study Guide
- Planning an emotive narrative scene in 'Whale Rider' Study Guide
- Planning the opening of 'Whale Rider' Study Guide
- Planning the resolution of 'Whale Rider' Study Guide
- Practising writing direct speech for 'Whale Rider' Study Guide
- Publishing and reading my 'Whale Rider' narrative aloud Study Guide
- Retelling the story of 'Whale Rider' Study Guide
- Writing paragraph one of an emotive narrative scene in 'Whale Rider' Study Guide
- Writing paragraph two of an emotive narrative scene in 'Whale Rider' Study Guide
- Writing the opening of 'Whale Rider' Study Guide
- Writing the resolution of 'Whale Rider' Study Guide
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