Year 5 - English
Editing the build-up of 'The Highwayman'
'The Highwayman': narrative writing
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Unit Summary
In this unit, pupils use 'The Highwayman' by Alfred Noyes as the stimulus from which to write a character and setting description, a narrative build-up in third person prose and a section incorporating varied speech sentences. Pupils complete the unit reciting and memorising parts of the poem.
Lesson Summary
You will learn to edit the build-up of your narrative writing.
Key Notes
- Editing is a vital element of the writing process.
- When editing, we must be selective about which parts of our writing to improve.
- When editing, we can focus on punctuation, sentence structure, vocabulary and spelling.
Vocabulary To Learn
- editing: the process of improving writing to improve text flow and overall quality
- grammar: the set of rules that govern a language
- punctuation: a set of standardised symbols and marks used in written language to structure sentences
- sentence structure: the way that words are arranged within sentences to convey meaning
- vocabulary: the language choices made by a writer
Common Mistakes To Avoid
- Pupils may find it difficult to identify which elements of their writing to edit.
3 Quick Questions (With Answers)
1. Explain this English learning goal in two key points.
Editing is a vital element of the writing process. When editing, we must be selective about which parts of our writing to improve.
2. Define this language term and use it in a sentence. 'editing'
the process of improving writing to improve text flow and overall quality.
3. Correct this common English misunderstanding.
Mistake: Pupils may find it difficult to identify which elements of their writing to edit. Correction: Learning cycles explicitly model how to edit different aspects of writing.
More Lessons In This Unit
- Analysing stanzas five and six of 'The Highwayman' Study Guide
- Analysing stanzas one and two of 'The Highwayman' Study Guide
- Analysing stanzas three and four of 'The Highwayman' Study Guide
- Editing the speech section of 'The Highwayman' Study Guide
- Learning and reciting stanzas four to six of 'The Highwayman' Study Guide
- Learning and reciting stanzas one to three of 'The Highwayman' Study Guide
- Planning a setting and character description based on 'The Highwayman' Study Guide
- Planning and writing the second part of the build-up of 'The Highwayman' Study Guide
- Planning the first part of the build-up of 'The Highwayman' Study Guide
- Planning the third part of the build-up of 'The Highwayman' Study Guide
- Reviewing speech punctuation to write the next section of 'The Highwayman' Study Guide
- Understanding the context of 'The Highwayman' Study Guide
- Using drama to analyse the next section of 'The Highwayman' Study Guide
- Writing a setting and character description based on 'The Highwayman' Study Guide
- Writing the first part of the build-up of 'The Highwayman' Study Guide
- Writing the third part of the build-up of 'The Highwayman' Study Guide
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