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Year 6 - English

Writing the second half of Juliet's diary entry

Shakespeare's 'Romeo and Juliet': diary and narrative writing

Unit Summary

In this unit, pupils learn to empathise with and understand different characters in one of Shakespeare's iconic plays. They write a diary entry from Juliet's perspective, a climactic narrative scene based on the duel scene and begin to debate around a key question raised from the play.

Lesson Summary

You will learn to write the second half of Juliet's imagined diary entry after meeting Romeo, using a range of linguistic features and cohesive devices..

Key Notes

  • A diary entry combines details about events with details about emotions.
  • We can use certain linguistic features to make an appropriate tone for a diary.
  • Hyperbole, internal thoughts, rhetorical questions and exclamation sentences make diary writing more personal.
  • We connect ideas together in writing with cohesive devices like fronted adverbials and different sentence types.
  • We may change tense between past and present during a diary entry.

Vocabulary To Learn

  • emotions: strong feelings experienced by a character in response to a their experiences
  • events: things that happen to a person or a character
  • linguistic features: language structures that are specific to a type of text
  • cohesive devices: language structures that develop text cohesion

Common Mistakes To Avoid

  • Pupils may find it difficult to switch between tenses in the final paragraph.

3 Quick Questions (With Answers)

1. Explain this English learning goal in two key points.

A diary entry combines details about events with details about emotions. We can use certain linguistic features to make an appropriate tone for a diary.

2. Define this language term and use it in a sentence. 'emotions'

strong feelings experienced by a character in response to a their experiences.

3. Correct this common English misunderstanding.

Mistake: Pupils may find it difficult to switch between tenses in the final paragraph. Correction: Ensure you share your thoughts as a writer as you do the shared writing for this paragraph, showing that it is normal to switch tenses in this way when we are describing present emotions with a retelling of past events.

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