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Year 6 - English

Writing the second paragraph of a persuasive letter to Sherlock Holmes

'Sherlock Holmes': descriptive and letter writing

Unit Summary

In this unit, pupils learn about conventions of detective fiction via one of the English canon's most famous series 'Sherlock Holmes'. They use knowledge of the central character to write a setting description and a persuasive letter from a member of the public in need of his services.

Lesson Summary

You will learn to write the second persuasive paragraph of a persuasive letter, giving reasons and evidence and using a range of persuasive techniques.

Key Notes

  • Writing is most successful when it is planned.
  • The paragraph should give a reason, followed by evidence to support that reason.
  • We should include a range of persuasive techniques in the paragraph.
  • Within the paragraph, ideas are connected using cohesive devices.
  • Parenthesis can be added to clarify a noun using commas or to emphasise a point using dashes.

Vocabulary To Learn

  • persuasive technique: a structure or device used in writing to try to change someone's mind or behaviour
  • cohesive devices: language structures that develop text cohesion
  • parenthesis: additional information that is added to a sentence; if it is removed, the sentence still makes sense
  • reason: an explanation or justification
  • evidence: information or facts that show something is true

Common Mistakes To Avoid

  • Pupils may struggle to add parenthesis to a sentence in the correct position.

3 Quick Questions (With Answers)

1. Explain this English learning goal in two key points.

Writing is most successful when it is planned. The paragraph should give a reason, followed by evidence to support that reason.

2. Define this language term and use it in a sentence. 'persuasive technique'

a structure or device used in writing to try to change someone's mind or behaviour.

3. Correct this common English misunderstanding.

Mistake: Pupils may struggle to add parenthesis to a sentence in the correct position. Correction: Parenthesis often follows a noun to add extra information; it can be removed and the sentence will still make sense.

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