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Year 10 - English

Emulating Murakami's craft to write a descriptive opening

Fiction: read around the world

Unit Summary

In this unit, pupils read extracts from four novels from around the world, and use them to develop their narrative writing. In particular, pupils explore writers' use of structure. At the end of the unit, pupils consider their own use of paragraphs for effect and write an engaging narrative.

Lesson Summary

You will learn to write an engaging descriptive opening paragraph using an omniscient perspective and extended metaphor.

Key Notes

  • Using an omniscient perspective allows the reader to be more immersed in a scene description.
  • An unusual choice of narrative perspective can make your omniscient perspective more engaging.
  • An extended metaphor is an opportunity to add detail and depth to writing.
  • An extended metaphor is most effective, when explored in multiple layers, e.g. using comparison and personification.

Vocabulary To Learn

  • Omniscient: all knowing
  • Immersive: allowing someone to become completely absorbed or involved in something
  • Extended metaphor: a metaphor that extends several lines of text
  • Personification: attribution of human characteristics to non-human things

Common Mistakes To Avoid

  • Students may find it difficult to harmonise their perspective choice with appropriate metaphors.

3 Quick Questions (With Answers)

1. Explain this English learning goal in two key points.

Using an omniscient perspective allows the reader to be more immersed in a scene description. An unusual choice of narrative perspective can make your omniscient perspective more engaging.

2. Define this language term and use it in a sentence. 'Omniscient'

all knowing.

3. Correct this common English misunderstanding.

Mistake: Students may find it difficult to harmonise their perspective choice with appropriate metaphors. Correction: Spend time discussing less effective pairings e.g. a tree would would not perceive people in a city as 'ants' but an airplane might.

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