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Year 5 - English

Writing part one of the main body of a persuasive letter, inspired by a text

'Front Desk': persuasive letter writing

Unit Summary

In this unit, pupils take inspiration from a scene in the text 'Front Desk' to write a persuasive letter to elected councillors. They build up persuasive writing skills, including flattery, presumption, evidence and veiled threat. Pupils apply a variety of conventions of formal letter writing.

Lesson Summary

You will learn to use a plan to write the first part of the main body of a persuasive letter, inspired by a text.

Key Notes

  • The purpose of the main body is to clearly state the writer's most persuasive points.
  • Using a plan and success criteria can help inform the writing process.
  • Presumption and veiled threat are appropriate persuasive techniques to use in the main body.
  • Points backed up by evidence, statistics, quotes or anecdotes are effective in making the writer sound credible.

Vocabulary To Learn

  • credibility: the fact that someone can be believed or trusted
  • evidence: facts or statistics used to back up a point
  • veiled threat: when the writer subtly threatens the reader
  • presumption: when the writer guesses or assumes the reader's opinion based on their character or position

Common Mistakes To Avoid

  • Pupils may use veiled threat as a persuasive technique, but they may use it clumsily or inappropriately.

3 Quick Questions (With Answers)

1. Explain this English learning goal in two key points.

The purpose of the main body is to clearly state the writer's most persuasive points. Using a plan and success criteria can help inform the writing process.

2. Define this language term and use it in a sentence. 'credibility'

the fact that someone can be believed or trusted.

3. Correct this common English misunderstanding.

Mistake: Pupils may use veiled threat as a persuasive technique, but they may use it clumsily or inappropriately. Correction: The scaffolding and modelling of what appropriate veiled threat looks and sounds like is explicit in the lesson.

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