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Year 6 - English

Self-editing the build-up of 'A Kind of Spark'

'A Kind of Spark': narrative writing

Unit Summary

In this unit, pupils write a build-up and climax based on the text, 'A Kind of Spark'. They learn to switch tense to highlight a jump in perspective from narrative prose to an internal monologue and from present to past tense to indicate a flashback. These outcomes can be used for KS2 SATS writing.

Lesson Summary

You will learn to edit your own build-up of 'A Kind of Spark', aiming to improve the punctuation, text cohesion and vocabulary.

Key Notes

  • Editing is a critical part of the writing process.
  • Writing is most successful when editing is used to rethink, rephrase and reconsider first ideas.
  • Editing can be done by oneself, with a peer or with a teacher.
  • Editing is most successful when it is chunked by punctuation, sentence structure, cohesive devices and vocabulary.
  • A growth mindset helps us benefit most from editing.

Vocabulary To Learn

  • cohesive devices: language structures that develop text cohesion
  • text cohesion: how a text flows to maintain the interest of the reader and achieve text purpose
  • growth mindset: a desire to keep developing any skill set

Common Mistakes To Avoid

  • Pupils may struggle to adopt a positive mindset towards editing.

3 Quick Questions (With Answers)

1. Explain this English learning goal in two key points.

Editing is a critical part of the writing process. Writing is most successful when editing is used to rethink, rephrase and reconsider first ideas.

2. Define this language term and use it in a sentence. 'cohesive devices'

language structures that develop text cohesion.

3. Correct this common English misunderstanding.

Mistake: Pupils may struggle to adopt a positive mindset towards editing. Correction: Encourage pupils to see this as an opportunity to push themselves towards producing a polished piece of work that shows off all their skills. Having a real audience for the text in mind will help them with this.

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