Year 2 - English
Writing the climax of 'Lucky Dip'
'Lucky Dip': narrative writing
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Year 2 - English
'Lucky Dip': narrative writing
In this unit, pupils write their own version of the short animation 'The Lucky Dip'. Pupils write using the narrative structure of opening, build-up, climax and resolution - a more sophisticated structure than beginning, middle, end. This unit can be used for KS1 writing teacher assessment purposes.
You will learn to write the climax of 'Lucky Dip'.
The purpose of the climax is to describe the significant challenge and create the highest point of tension. Fronted adverbials of manner tell the reader how something was done or how a character felt.
a sentence starter that tells the reader how something happened or how a character was feeling.
Mistake: Pupils may choose inappropriate fronted adverbials of manner, which do not describe the verb in the most effective way. Correction: Give children printed sentences and printed fronted adverbials of manner and allow them to choose the most appropriate one to start each sentence. Children work in pairs and then compare with another pair.
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