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Year 7 - English

Using similes to create atmosphere in dystopian descriptions

Dystopian settings: descriptive writing

Unit Summary

In this unit, pupils learn to write atmospheric dystopian settings. They first review and deepen their understanding of sentence types, before looking at how to use figurative language and sophisticated punctuation to enhance their descriptions. They finally plan and write a dystopian setting.

Lesson Summary

You will learn to identify how similes are used to create atmosphere in dystopian descriptions.

Key Notes

  • Similes are a useful technique for creating atmosphere
  • Excellent similes will uses carefully selected adjectives and noun phrases so comparisons are suitable
  • Subordinate clauses can be used to add vivid detail to your similes
  • When analysing a writer's use of similes, zoom in on individual word choices and explain how they create atmosphere

Vocabulary To Learn

  • Labyrinth: A labyrinth is a maze that is incredibly difficult to escape.
  • Dilapidated: If a building is dilapidated it is in a state of despair and ruin.
  • Awry: If something has gone awry, something has gone wrong - it is not on its expected course.
  • Forlorn: Forlorn means pitifully sad and abandoned.

Common Mistakes To Avoid

  • As long as a similes compare something similar it is effective.

3 Quick Questions (With Answers)

1. Explain this English learning goal in two key points.

Similes are a useful technique for creating atmosphere. Excellent similes will uses carefully selected adjectives and noun phrases so comparisons are suitable.

2. Define this language term and use it in a sentence. 'Labyrinth'

A labyrinth is a maze that is incredibly difficult to escape.

3. Correct this common English misunderstanding.

Mistake: As long as a similes compare something similar it is effective. Correction: Similes are much more powerful when used alongside vivid description. Work through example in learning cycle 1 to help unravel this.

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