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Year 4 - English

Writing the second paragraph of a persuasive advert

Healthy eating adverts: persuasive writing

Unit Summary

In this unit, pupils explore the features of persuasive adverts, focusing on engaging language and effective structure. They create persuasive headlines and generate compelling content for their own advert promoting chocolate energy balls. The unit culminates in publishing their completed advert.

Lesson Summary

You will learn to write a persuasive paragraph that details the health benefits of a product.

Key Notes

  • It is crucial to communicate the unique selling point of a product.
  • A persuasive advert should explain the benefits of a product to the reader, e.g. health benefits.
  • For a healthy food product, it is crucial to detail ingredients, nutrients and health benefits.
  • A formal fronted adverbial can be used to contrast information within a main clause.

Vocabulary To Learn

  • health benefit: refers to the positive effects on a person's health gained from food, treatment, or an activity
  • formal fronted adverbial: a sentence starter followed by a comma which is formal in tone and often found in non-fiction texts
  • contrast: to highlight a difference, often between items or elements in juxtaposition
  • unique selling point: this is what makes a product better than others on the market

Common Mistakes To Avoid

  • Children may struggle with using a formal fronted adverbial to contrast appropriately.

3 Quick Questions (With Answers)

1. Explain this English learning goal in two key points.

It is crucial to communicate the unique selling point of a product. A persuasive advert should explain the benefits of a product to the reader, e.g. health benefits.

2. Define this language term and use it in a sentence. 'health benefit'

refers to the positive effects on a person's health gained from food, treatment, or an activity.

3. Correct this common English misunderstanding.

Mistake: Children may struggle with using a formal fronted adverbial to contrast appropriately. Correction: Model a formal fronted adverbial of contrast used incorrectly (reiterate same point in main clause). Ask children to analyse and correct it.

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