Year 9 - English
Using sentence structure to create rhythm in writing about World War One
Literary perspectives from the First World War
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Unit Summary
In this unit, pupils explore and compare texts written about the First World War. They first read Beck's 'Propping up the line', Mansfield's 'The Fly' and Wilfred Owen's 1917 letter home to his mum. They finally read Brittain's 'Testament of Youth', and then plan and write a comparative response.
Lesson Summary
You will learn to explore how Ian Beck and Wilfred Owen use sentence structure to give their writing rhythm and, inspired by them, craft a creative paragraph with engaging rhythm.
Key Notes
- Writers spend time crafting the rhythm of their writing, as well as the words.
- In writing, rhythm is created through sentence construction and punctuation.
- Rhythm creates energy, pace and tension.
- Rhythm can engage the reader, and draw their attention to certain things.
Vocabulary To Learn
- rhythm: the beat, flow, or pattern of a piece of music or writing
- punctuation: the marks we use to separate sentences, or parts of sentences; good punctuation creates clarity and rhythm
- full stop: a punctuation mark that comes at the end of a sentence; a very powerful piece of punctuation
- comma: a punctuation mark that is used to create a pause in a sentence, often in a list
- comma splice: when you use a comma to divide two independent ideas, but should have used a full stop instead of comma
Common Mistakes To Avoid
- Commas and full stops are interchangeable.
3 Quick Questions (With Answers)
1. Explain this English learning goal in two key points.
Writers spend time crafting the rhythm of their writing, as well as the words. In writing, rhythm is created through sentence construction and punctuation.
2. Define this language term and use it in a sentence. 'rhythm'
the beat, flow, or pattern of a piece of music or writing.
3. Correct this common English misunderstanding.
Mistake: Commas and full stops are interchangeable. Correction: Full stops divide independent clauses and create a longer pause than a comma. Full stops divide ideas and create clear writing. Commas divide subordinate clauses and lists. They create a shorter pause.
More Lessons In This Unit
- Analysing the presentation of the gas attack: Ian Beck's 'Propping Up the Line' Study Guide
- Comparing texts about World War One in comparative analytical paragraphs Study Guide
- Comparing texts about World War One using comparative topic sentences Study Guide
- Creative writing in the third person inspired by Katherine Mansfield's 'The Fly' Study Guide
- Debating different interpretations of Katherine Mansfield's 'The Fly' Study Guide
- Exploring the presentation of the boss in 'The Fly' by Katherine Mansfield Study Guide
- Ian Beck's 'Propping Up The Line': Alice's experiences on the Home Front Study Guide
- Improving a letter: deliberate verbs and precise adjectives Study Guide
- Improving the style of a letter: sentence structure and rhythm Study Guide
- Katherine Mansfield's 'The Fly' (1922): exploring character foils and symbolism Study Guide
- Letter writing: planning, using Vera Brittain's 'Testament of Youth' as stimulus Study Guide
- Letter writing: planning, using Wilfred Owen's 1917 letter as stimulus Study Guide
- Reading 'Propping Up the Line', a short story about World War One by Ian Beck Study Guide
- Reading Katherine Mansfield's short story, 'The Fly' (1922) Study Guide
- Skim reading and close reading: 'Testament of Youth' by Vera Brittain Study Guide
- Skim reading and close reading: Wilfred Owen's 1917 letter to his mother Study Guide
- Symbolism and motif in Ian Beck's short story, 'Propping Up The Line' Study Guide
- The presentation of trauma in Ian Beck's short story, 'Propping Up the Line' Study Guide
- Understanding why people write about war Study Guide
- Vivid descriptive writing using Ian Beck's 'Propping Up The Line' as stimulus Study Guide
- World War One: propaganda and trench warfare Study Guide
- Writing a letter as a soldier in the trenches of World War One Study Guide
- Writing a letter from the British home front: tone, audience and purpose Study Guide
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