Year 9 - English
Improving the style of a letter: sentence structure and rhythm
Literary perspectives from the First World War
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Unit Summary
In this unit, pupils explore and compare texts written about the First World War. They first read Beck's 'Propping up the line', Mansfield's 'The Fly' and Wilfred Owen's 1917 letter home to his mum. They finally read Brittain's 'Testament of Youth', and then plan and write a comparative response.
Lesson Summary
You will learn to improve a letter which recounts an imagined experience in the trenches by using a range of sentence lengths and fronted adverbials.
Key Notes
- Rhythm is the beat, flow, or pattern of a piece of music or writing.
- Writers create rhythm by using a variety of sentence types and punctuation.
- Fronted adverbials are words or phrases at the beginning of a sentence which describe the action that follows.
- Fronted adverbials can help organise writing by explaining how, when or why something happens.
- Fronted adverbials can help create tension.
Vocabulary To Learn
- rhythm: the beat, flow, or pattern of a piece of music or writing
- recount: to describe something that happened, to tell its story
- tension: the mental strain a reader is put under because of their suspicion that something bad is about to happen
- fronted adverbials: words or phrases at the beginning of a sentence which describe the action that follows
- variety: a range of different forms, types, things
Common Mistakes To Avoid
- Word choice is more important than rhythm.
3 Quick Questions (With Answers)
1. Explain this English learning goal in two key points.
Rhythm is the beat, flow, or pattern of a piece of music or writing. Writers create rhythm by using a variety of sentence types and punctuation.
2. Define this language term and use it in a sentence. 'rhythm'
the beat, flow, or pattern of a piece of music or writing.
3. Correct this common English misunderstanding.
Mistake: Word choice is more important than rhythm. Correction: Word choice and powerful literary methods (for example metaphor) are hard things to craft and deserve time and attention. But so too does your sentence construction. Consider if you heard one of your favourite songs but there was no rhythm to it.
More Lessons In This Unit
- Analysing the presentation of the gas attack: Ian Beck's 'Propping Up the Line' Study Guide
- Comparing texts about World War One in comparative analytical paragraphs Study Guide
- Comparing texts about World War One using comparative topic sentences Study Guide
- Creative writing in the third person inspired by Katherine Mansfield's 'The Fly' Study Guide
- Debating different interpretations of Katherine Mansfield's 'The Fly' Study Guide
- Exploring the presentation of the boss in 'The Fly' by Katherine Mansfield Study Guide
- Ian Beck's 'Propping Up The Line': Alice's experiences on the Home Front Study Guide
- Improving a letter: deliberate verbs and precise adjectives Study Guide
- Katherine Mansfield's 'The Fly' (1922): exploring character foils and symbolism Study Guide
- Letter writing: planning, using Vera Brittain's 'Testament of Youth' as stimulus Study Guide
- Letter writing: planning, using Wilfred Owen's 1917 letter as stimulus Study Guide
- Reading 'Propping Up the Line', a short story about World War One by Ian Beck Study Guide
- Reading Katherine Mansfield's short story, 'The Fly' (1922) Study Guide
- Skim reading and close reading: 'Testament of Youth' by Vera Brittain Study Guide
- Skim reading and close reading: Wilfred Owen's 1917 letter to his mother Study Guide
- Symbolism and motif in Ian Beck's short story, 'Propping Up The Line' Study Guide
- The presentation of trauma in Ian Beck's short story, 'Propping Up the Line' Study Guide
- Understanding why people write about war Study Guide
- Using sentence structure to create rhythm in writing about World War One Study Guide
- Vivid descriptive writing using Ian Beck's 'Propping Up The Line' as stimulus Study Guide
- World War One: propaganda and trench warfare Study Guide
- Writing a letter as a soldier in the trenches of World War One Study Guide
- Writing a letter from the British home front: tone, audience and purpose Study Guide
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