Year 9 - English
Vivid descriptive writing using Ian Beck's 'Propping Up The Line' as stimulus
Literary perspectives from the First World War
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Unit Summary
In this unit, pupils explore and compare texts written about the First World War. They first read Beck's 'Propping up the line', Mansfield's 'The Fly' and Wilfred Owen's 1917 letter home to his mum. They finally read Brittain's 'Testament of Youth', and then plan and write a comparative response.
Lesson Summary
You will learn to write a vivid description inspired by Ian Beck's 'Propping Up The Line' which captures some of Alfred's experiences and memories of the front line.
Key Notes
- Many writers use vivid description to convey the horrors of the front line.
- Beck shows the depth of Alfred's trauma when the noise and sight of washing transports him back to the front line.
- A vivid description is the result of careful planning and close attention to methods.
Vocabulary To Learn
- vivid: clear, powerful, realistic
- Wilfred Owen: a British soldier and poet (1893-1918) best known for his poems about World War One
- methods: the tools a writer uses to create their work; language choices, setting, characterisation are all examples
- single paragraph outline: a way to plan a paragraph in which you write the first and last sentence, and carefully consider the details you want to capture in the paragraph
Common Mistakes To Avoid
- You can only use single paragraph outlines to plan analytical writing.
3 Quick Questions (With Answers)
1. Explain this English learning goal in two key points.
Many writers use vivid description to convey the horrors of the front line. Beck shows the depth of Alfred's trauma when the noise and sight of washing transports him back to the front line.
2. Define this language term and use it in a sentence. 'vivid'
clear, powerful, realistic.
3. Correct this common English misunderstanding.
Mistake: You can only use single paragraph outlines to plan analytical writing. Correction: We structure so much of our writing using paragraphs. All paragraphs, whether creative or analytical or something else, require a clear and carefully planned structure.
More Lessons In This Unit
- Analysing the presentation of the gas attack: Ian Beck's 'Propping Up the Line' Study Guide
- Comparing texts about World War One in comparative analytical paragraphs Study Guide
- Comparing texts about World War One using comparative topic sentences Study Guide
- Creative writing in the third person inspired by Katherine Mansfield's 'The Fly' Study Guide
- Debating different interpretations of Katherine Mansfield's 'The Fly' Study Guide
- Exploring the presentation of the boss in 'The Fly' by Katherine Mansfield Study Guide
- Ian Beck's 'Propping Up The Line': Alice's experiences on the Home Front Study Guide
- Improving a letter: deliberate verbs and precise adjectives Study Guide
- Improving the style of a letter: sentence structure and rhythm Study Guide
- Katherine Mansfield's 'The Fly' (1922): exploring character foils and symbolism Study Guide
- Letter writing: planning, using Vera Brittain's 'Testament of Youth' as stimulus Study Guide
- Letter writing: planning, using Wilfred Owen's 1917 letter as stimulus Study Guide
- Reading 'Propping Up the Line', a short story about World War One by Ian Beck Study Guide
- Reading Katherine Mansfield's short story, 'The Fly' (1922) Study Guide
- Skim reading and close reading: 'Testament of Youth' by Vera Brittain Study Guide
- Skim reading and close reading: Wilfred Owen's 1917 letter to his mother Study Guide
- Symbolism and motif in Ian Beck's short story, 'Propping Up The Line' Study Guide
- The presentation of trauma in Ian Beck's short story, 'Propping Up the Line' Study Guide
- Understanding why people write about war Study Guide
- Using sentence structure to create rhythm in writing about World War One Study Guide
- World War One: propaganda and trench warfare Study Guide
- Writing a letter as a soldier in the trenches of World War One Study Guide
- Writing a letter from the British home front: tone, audience and purpose Study Guide
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